This is a re-write of the end of a book called call me harry.
Call me Harry
"I'll text you when I am home".
Harry knew that I didn't have a phone.
When Harry got home she waited to hear from Jake to get his mobile number. The next time Harry went to Jake's house Harry asked Jake why he didn't gave her his mobile number. Jake told her that he doesn't have a phone.Harry said "oh
, but wasn't the challenge to get a phone?"
So when Jake finally got a phone Harry always texted Jake the new challenges.
But one break Jake saw Harry with a group of boys and Harry was fitting in nicely. After school when Jake was at Harry's house for the challenge Jake told Harry that he was proud of her because she was with a group of boys. But Harry said "That wasn't me".
The next day Jake was very sad when he got home to get ready for the next challenge. Jake's mum saw that Jake was sad so she asked why he was sad. Jake told his mum that he thought that Harry was with a group of boys but she wasn't. When Jake got to Harry's house Harry said "you don't have to be sad just because it wasn't me who was with the group of boys". I'll get some friends soon. Now let's get on with the challenge.
After 4 terms at school Harry's mum told Harry that she found a great new house. The next day Harry told Jake that today is her last day at Bayview Primary School.After school Jake told his mum that today was his last day at Bayview primary school. Before Harry went he went to Jake's house one more time to say good buy.Then Jake waved good buy.the end
By Kirsten
Amazing work Kirsten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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